两幅地图任务：雅思写作task 1范文的四句概述与三区比较

同一地点的两幅地图、二十分钟，以及一个从左上角第一栋能看到的建筑写起的考生。四十个词之后，他们还在罗列停车场，而占分最多的概述仍未动笔。这个雅思写作task 1范文要解决的就是这种开局。

地图题奖励比较，而不是清单。考官想看到你能选出重要变化，并用准确、多样的语言表达出来。这个雅思写作task 1范文的方法围绕四句概述和三个区域展开。

地图题真正考查什么

任务完成情况考查你是否覆盖关键特征并给出概述。对地图题来说，关键特征是变化，而不是现有内容。

连贯与衔接考查答案是否有组织。地图题可以按区域或按变化类型自然组织，只要坚持一种方式，两种都可以。

词汇资源要求使用变化语言：被取代、被扩建、被改造、被移除、被新增。语法范围要求被动语态和过去时，因为多数变化是发生在该地点身上，而不是由该地点完成。

这些都不要求提到每一栋建筑。选择本身就是任务的一部分。

先写概述，用四句话

先写概述，再写细节。四句话几乎可以覆盖任何两幅地图。

第一句：总体方向。The village changed from a small fishing settlement into a resort with tourist facilities.

第二句：什么扩大了。The area given to accommodation and leisure expanded considerably.

第三句：什么消失了。The fishing infrastructure was removed entirely.

第四句：什么保留了。The main road and the church remained in their original positions.

把这一段直接放在引言之后。它不是结尾的总结；在任务1中，它应放在开头附近。

选择三个区域，其余忽略

把两幅地图都分成三个区域：例如道路以北、道路以南和滨水区。然后用两三句话描述每个区域。

区域	1990	今天	可写的一句话
道路以北	农田、两座小屋	酒店和停车场	The farmland north of the road was built on.
滨水区	码头、船棚	游艇码头、餐厅	The boat sheds were replaced by a restaurant.
道路以南	学校、运动场	学校扩建、运动场保留	The school was extended, while the field was unchanged.

三个区域、三次比较，答案就覆盖了关键特征，而不必罗列每一处结构。

能拿分的动词与被动语态

replaced, converted into, extended, demolished, constructed, converted, widened, relocated, kept, retained.

把它们用于被动语态：the sheds were demolished、the field was retained。被动不是装饰；当动作执行者未知或不重要时，它就是自然形式，而地图题正是这种情况。

加入精确的位置语言：to the north of、along the eastern edge、opposite the pier、adjacent to the car park。地点精确性是地图题相对图表题少数会奖励的东西之一。

一组村庄地图的完整答案

The two maps show a coastal village in 1990 and the same village today.

Overall, the settlement changed from a fishing village into a small resort: the waterfront became recreational, the farmland north of the road was built on, and the road and church were retained.

North of the main road, the two cottages and the farmland that surrounded them were replaced by a hotel with a car park. The lane leading to the farmland was widened and is now the hotel entrance.

Along the waterfront, the pier was extended and the boat sheds were demolished. A restaurant was constructed where the sheds stood, and the quay was paved.

South of the road, the school was extended with an additional building, while the playing field was kept and is now used by both the school and the hotel. The church and the main road remained unchanged.

四段，约190个词，每一句都在比较两种状态，而不是只描述一种状态。

这类任务的三种常见错误

只描述第二幅地图。比较才是答案；单一状态描述在任务完成情况上无法超过5分。

罗列而不分组。二十栋建筑写二十个短句，读起来就是清单，连贯与衔接评分会因此扣分。

编造原因。They built the hotel because tourism increased 并不在数据中。描述变化，不要解释变化。

常见问题

两幅地图的概述怎么写？

四句话：变化的总体方向、什么扩大了、什么消失了、什么保持不变。把它紧跟在引言之后而不是放在结尾，并保持概括，因为具体数字和建筑名称属于细节段。

地图上的每栋建筑都要描述吗？

不需要。选择三个区域，每个区域用两三句比较性句子描述，其余略去。任务完成情况奖励的是覆盖关键变化和清晰概述，而不是详尽清单；清单通常会耗掉你本应用来写比较语言的字数。